The Intangible Design, Fifth: The Unholy
The Intangible Design is now posted.
Fifth of Six.
The Archbishop reveals his true loyalty, and puts his blindfold aside. His eyes beneath are not human eyes.
A touch or two of rewriting was called for here, since the scene written in my journeyman days lacked emotional impact. The one thing I remembered from this short story, which I thought my best effect, was the archbishop’s description of the true nature of the dome of heaven, and what was beyond.